Ouh thats a great one. For my personal taste the "Pumping" effect is a bit to intense, but by hearing the quality of this production I am shure that you did exactly this for purpose and after listening a few times it fits to the style. The only thing where I cant get used to is the intense Stereo effect on the kick itself. There I would have chosen a bit more punchy one that comes more from the center and not the side.
Anyways this is one of the best songs I heard here till now, so 5/5.

The kicks could be harder, but anyways this is a really nice banger.

Hmmm I don't know. The Quality of the Sound itself is good, the melody is okay. The track could could have a bit more structure from my point of view. I don't know exactly how to describe it... somehow more definable "this is a main part, this is a bridge, this is main part 2, this is the hook and at the end an outtro. The intro buildup from the beginning on is also good, I really like it all until 0:27. There is something that drives me crazy and kinda ruins it for me: There is do much delay on the synth that fades in there. It is sounds to me out of sync. The good thing: Thats all fixable and in the end this comment means: Its a good start just not finished till now, but please continue, cause I think would like to hear it when it is done. Hopefully my points help you to know where to improve.
Edit: Ahh yeah... Maybe try different notes on bass and melody. That means leave the melody as ist, but the bass might have longer notes that fits to the melody, but that it is not the same as the melody. I don't know if I would change the notes of the Synth that fades in at 0:27, or if I would add another synth and and then maybe cut the lows from the other one... maybe just test and find out.